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Friday, May 3, 2019

long write - likes and feedback -

Hello blogers yester day I did a long write and never finished it and need alttke bit of idas to finish my story. What chould happen after my story ends and what dangers chould he come acrosss and other things like that becouse im kinda out of ideas for my story but the idas have to wrap around a jungile or trees chould you also give me some name ideas if you can think of any. Hrere is the story so far please enjoy


He had found it lying alone, deserted, abandoned in the attic. After making the discovery,
Jeff had gazed and marvelled at it for some time. Where had it come from?
Why had no dust settled upon it, as it had done over everything else that resided in her attic?
A layer of the thick dust blanketed the attic floor, and as the sunlight glared through the attic windows,
the dust particles yet to settle were illuminated as they danced in the stuffy air.
Yet, the mirror looked flawless, untouched by age, not a finger print in sight.
Jeff propped the mirror up against one of the thick, timber beams that jutted from the attic floor.
Settling down into a comfortable position, she tentatively placed a finger against the glass.
When he did it sent ripples flying across the glass, Jeff was amazed at what happened,
than an crazy thought popped into her head what would happen if he jumped into the mirror.
Than Jeff got a running start and when he caught enough length he pushed himself of with his
foot and went flying head first into the mirror. When he saw what had happened his mouth was
open so wide you could fit an watermelon in his month. He gazed around in the deep blue portal
until he saw a lot of clocks going backwards in time than he realized his mistake it was a mirror
that threw him back in time but Jeff didn't know were he was going to end up in time or if he could
get back home.
After an lot of time traveling Jeff found out where he was… in ancient time.
But the first thing he did was hear a rumble come from a volcano.
Within seconds the volcano shout out an rock than started vomiting out lava that would melt any
thing it touched. But just after that rocks and lava where running after him. But Jeff ran in the other
direction so fast you could only see him as an blur.When he found a cave without him thinking he
jumped down and looked at the entrance. But the lava had already walked through the entrance and
sizzling the rocks.
But as he was running something out of the blue happened a rock smashed down on the ground nearly
slamming his foot. As he was catching his breath he heard some faint mumbles coming from the
darkness.Then he caught the courage to get up and face the darkness. After moving a few steps
he heard loud footsteps running from him leaving an torch behind. As Jeff picked up the torch he
walked into the darkness he found an caveman cooking some food but then it hit him he went to the
caveman era.
As he reached into his pocket to check google maps he couldn't find his phone but he did feel a piece
of paper and It said to find the way to get back you have to find the way you got here
Jeff was puzzled by this but then it hit him to get out you have to find the mirror. But the caveman
indicated that he had to follow him. When the caveman stopped Jeff walked into the darkness one
more time the caveman stopped him but gave him an weapon.
Jeff was worried that he could get injured going into the room but he pulled up the courage to go in
and he stepped in and light hit him like a ball to the chest. When he looked around he saw more people
in the stands cheering him on and an gate closeing some thing off but he heard deadly snarls
coming from the gate but when he stepped into the middle of the room he heard a boom
echo through the room than he found he was in an arena.
When the boom calmed down the other gate open he saw an tiger pounce at him and it look hungry.
lucky he pulled up his weapon and blocked the attack. He tried to push the tiger back and he did.
Then the  gate closed and there was a loud sisal around him. but than an stream of lava came through
the gate holes and into the arena but luckily Jeff saw an crack in the ground and started to bash it until
it created an hole. Then he  jumped down and landed in a pool of water.
After realizing where he was he got up and saw the mirror he touched it and looked around and saw
a lot of trees.


1 comment:

  1. Hi My name is Jaylim
    I am a student at pt england school. I think this post was a bit interesting and a bit random but I like how it is unique. I like how you chose to put unicorns and tacos in the same animation. I have 1 question. What is a home blog

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