Presenting my masterpiece!!!!!!

Hello,bloggers last week I did my shark tank presentation. I was the first in the term to do it because I felt super confident about it. I used canva to make it ( because I was familiar with it ). The first thing we had to do was write the report ( we did that in term 2 ) and then publish it. We had to share it even if it was the report. The topic for the report was pet habitat that we made. I found it fun to draw because it could be anything. I decided to make a ipad rodent cage. Here is my report.
  The rodent padtm!
                                                                        Intro
                                                           
This brand new product is an extraordinary rodent cage Created by Toby Dixon in christchurch,new zealand. This scientific cage is what pet owners need made for taking  pets on the go wherever pet owners want to go. So all pet owners thinking about where they can go and not go but  pet owners  can go anywhere they want with it but most other cages can't so that's a point that this is the best but we only just started.

                                                                                             The style 
All pet owners are most likely thinking well what does this thing look like and feel like so here it is. Pet owners can choose out of the colors are lava red,sea blue and sunset orange. But for an extra price pet owners can get neon colors of the main colors. And the outside of the cage is made of sturdy rubber so if pet owners drop it it won't hurt the animal inside. The glass protecting the inside is thin but stronger than it looks.                     

                                                          The price

This product costs $650 or $700 for neon colors. This is important because every pet owner wants a heavy duty pet cage for their little friend and so that pet owners can take their pets anywhere they want to go. Every pet owner wants to keep an eye on their pets so this is the best thing for pet owners.

                             Enhancement of the pet's life

This product has pets fun go through the roof because Pet owners just put pest in boring old cages all day. But the rodent pad is more fun than any other cage in the world.The built in toys help a lot to the fun meter. This product is an on the go thing so every pet owner can keep an eye on their pets.

                                                  The convenience

  The pet carrey is convenient because It is made of light materials so It is easier to lift and easy to drop. This also the deal with the door it is easy to open and close. The food is easy to  fill because of the food cute to toss the food into the cage for the pet to nibble at.

                                                          Conclusion

In conclusion this is the thing that all pet owners need because this is asotorodanary truly astrodanary.This product is the best thing in the world. 95% of people that tried  the rodent cage said that it was brilliant,helpful,the best.
 

Here is the canva

canva 2.0 by Toby
Here is my Presentation

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My antonym DLO

Hello, bloggers this week we were learning about synonyms,antonyms ,homophones and something else but I forgot what it was called. We had to make a DLO about one thing that we learnt. I chose antonyms because I could think of all the different kinds of things I could do. I chose to do the antonym of hot/cold and I put two cups and here it is my DLO.

My narrative - likes and feedback-

Hello,bloggers yesterday I wrote a narrative about a shipwreck and I want to share it to you for two reasons to just let you share it and to get some feedback on it. It is set in a ship that broke down and he is trying to find a way back to society but there is a twist in the end.  Could you please give me some feed back on how I could improve on it.

Three weeks. That is how long the ship had been like this; empty, abandoned, alone…
as the only surviving crew member wakes up He wonders how much longer he has to
stay like this. Whale he climbs up the old red rusty boat steps he sees the sun shining
bright like a natural light bulb. As he dose he morning checks to see if any damage was
done to the boat. As he stares into the water waving to him like a tree in the wind  he
remembers the day that the boat crashed and how everyone jumped in the water never
to be seen again.

After he snaps back into reality he hears water running to him like a cheetah running to
catch its prey. He looked at the wave crashing to wards him as he runs to get to cover he
hears the wave coming closer and closer coming to swallow him to the bottom of the
ocean. As the wave hits the boat he loses his grip from all the water pushing him to let go
and float down to the bottom of the sea.

As he resisted the oceans hands from pulling him down to the bottom. He
finally reaches the top and swallows in a huge gulp of air. A he looks to see if the boat
had moved he found the old rusty ladder that the crew used to use to climb on it they feel off.

       As he climbs up an huge wave comes and pushes him down. As he hits the water
everything went black but than an hand pulls him up onto the boat.
Than he realizes that the person was wearing the same crew uniform as
him but than it hits him this was one of the crew members  that was with him
when the boat crashed. But than he felt coldness at his feet and when he looked
down there was water at his feet. But the boat had an huge hole in the side.

But than he remembered about the emergency gear in the inside of the operation
room. So he got ready but than before he went in an hand stopped him And than his
crew member agreed that they should both go in because he had the key to the operation
room. As they both jumped in  they felt the freezing cold water touch them but they both
knew what would happen if they didn't do this brave task. As they were swimming they found
the operation room and located the box and brought it up to the top off the boat to open it.

As they opened it they saw that most of the stuff was used but nothing but ine thing a flare.
As they got it set up they got ready to fire it and hope some one saw it and come save them.
As they waited they saw an plane coming down at first they thought it had crashed but it  was
comeing to save them. As they got ready to jump on the plane the door opened and the poilit
was wearing full black but they still got on. As they were going over an jungil they crashed
and landed in the middle of a forest.