Hello bloggers, For the ones who read my last post you would have known I have been doing a narrative. But I didn't finish it so this is the full story. The website I used to make my flip book was flipsnack. Give it a try because you can make an amazing story even better. The front cover picture was made on flipsnack because it has 126 different shapes. This story is the second narrative I ever done so I hope you enjoy.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, September 21, 2018
Wednesday, September 19, 2018
My writing - narrative post test -
Hello, bloggers, today I did my narrative post-test. I was so fun to write the draft and planning to make the story on track and not of in different ways. My story was about a spaceman going around the milky way trying to fix mars because of a bomb explosion. But my story isn't finished yet. In my story, there are dragons, a black dotted planet ( you will find out what is on the planet when I finished my story. ) So here it is.
Somewhere in space in the year 2029, there was a spaceman by the name of matt. Matt was a brave man he had faced many challenges like space spiders and aliens. One day this all changed. This is this is the story of matt. After a successful mission of sneaking into enemy mothership one three nine eight ane getting planes for the aliens next attack, the commander said ¨ Matt get to mars now before it's too late “. As Matt ran to his ship and got to mars there was a huge explosion.
Then on the radio matts commander said ¨ do you remember the fight from two centuries age ¨ than matt replied ¨ yeah I do why are you asking ¨ Than the commander replied with ¨ well they put a bomb in mars but they must have accidentally put it on the year 2029 and it blew up right now ” than static came on then the commander said ¨ huge chunks of mars got to different planets and through the milky way ¨ than matt replied ¨ on it ¨ so fast that the commander couldn't say are you on it.
When watt went to the Saturn but as he landed he released a loud growl. It was a space dragon that was on the planet and it was in front of a piece of mars. Matt got out his gun got a tranquilizer dart but look at what it said on it and the one he grabbed was one century instead of three minutes and when Matt shoot the dragon it went to sleep instantly. Then he called his commander to ask how he was going to pick the piece of mars up than a huge robot suit came down than matt jumped in the suit than it turned on ¨ system activate ¨ than matt grabbed the piece of mars than put it where mars went.
Then the commander said ¨ that was the only planet that had a piece of mars on it, now you have to go through the milky way and our tracker won't be in range, so good luck ¨ when Matt went through the milky way things got weird. The first planet matt went to had black spots on it. When he landed on the planet he saw a line of red dust.
Wednesday, September 12, 2018
My reading work - the kookaburra -
Hello bloggers, this week for reading I have been working on the kookaburra activities. The first activity I did was ¨ make a poster/advert/ youtube ad ¨ but I chose to do a poster. I did it on draw.io and it is fun and easy as pie and by easy as pie I mean it's easy as pie. Go try it out sometime and if you have never used draw.io before I promise you that you will like it.
Friday, September 7, 2018
My reading - what a cassowary dose when its fels cornered
Hello bloggers, this week in reading I´ve been reading about the Cassowary. Did you know that the cassowary is the most dangerous bird in the world? I would not want to have this bird as a pet. I did an activity about what a cassowary does when it´s cornered. What happens in the slide is not really what happens when a cassowary rams you.
Wednesday, September 5, 2018
My maths - algebra
Hello, bloggers, this week in maths I have been working on algebra in my maths. You may think its hard but I think its easy when you get hang of it then its so easy. When I first saw it I thought it was going to be so hard well it was but not as hard as I thought. But who would have had the idea to put numbers and letters together?
Well if you like algebra here are three questions. 10 + a = 26, 26 + q = 30, 30 + a = 50.
Well if you like algebra here are three questions. 10 + a = 26, 26 + q = 30, 30 + a = 50.
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