I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey there, I'm Sky and I'm from Hornby Primary School. You are good at adding adjectives. Did you think about your spelling and where you put your question marks? Next time, you could make your story longer.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Something helpful - add more info or ask me a question. 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning?
Hey there, I'm Sky and I'm from Hornby Primary School.
ReplyDeleteYou are good at adding adjectives. Did you think about your spelling and where you put your question marks? Next time, you could make your story longer.