my writing

It was the day the moon fell to earth... then it all was silent till the big explosion, there was a BANG ! BANG! hen the earth blew up. Then aliens came to dance on the new planet that they made, it was blown up too so the aliens got away just in time! The attackers left so the aliens could not see but they think it was the humans it was.they wanted to get revenge on the aliens, then they went to their ship.  -

Later on that day they danced, they even put the disco ball and the cool disco floor and disco lights out then they had a great time. All of the Aliens went home to mars where they had mars bars all day long.then they went to the abandoned satan to get food,but the humans made it there.they had all the food so they started to do tug of war over the last bag of marshmallows but it got ripped in half.  Then the head pipile looked at each other then they started to...pick up the marshmallows one by one then they went to build a new planet together.