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Wednesday, May 24, 2017

My Narrative Writing Piece

 
He pushed his hand into the carved hand-print on the rock, there was a rumble from beneath his feet and then it opened and he fell with a KASPLAT! and he turned  into a skeleton and he saw a sowde and a shield he went in this weird  hole then he had to fight a giant monster with  big scary teeth that went BANG! BANG! And big scary and sharp claws that could cut a wall so he was worried.
So he gave a gulp and then he ran at the monster and he was lucky cos the monster mist him and he had the best time to strike and he hit the monster in the stomach and the monsters blood came out like a river. Then the man ran so he did not have to swim to the exit the man made it out just in time the river of blood got shut out the big wooden door and the man got shut on the other side of the door.

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