From the desk of Toby

This is my writing piece about the metal ghost who can see through walls. I hope you like my writing piece, please leave a comment! 

From Toby 

How to to comment like a boss!

toby and kade's moive

my writing

It was the day the moon fell to earth... then it all was silent till the big explosion, there was a BANG ! BANG! hen the earth blew up. Then aliens came to dance on the new planet that they made, it was blown up too so the aliens got away just in time! The attackers left so the aliens could not see but they think it was the humans it was.they wanted to get revenge on the aliens, then they went to their ship.  -

Later on that day they danced, they even put the disco ball and the cool disco floor and disco lights out then they had a great time. All of the Aliens went home to mars where they had mars bars all day long.then they went to the abandoned satan to get food,but the humans made it there.they had all the food so they started to do tug of war over the last bag of marshmallows but it got ripped in half.  Then the head pipile looked at each other then they started to...pick up the marshmallows one by one then they went to build a new planet together.

Screencastify Maths

WALT: We are learning how to add 8+9 using screen castify and blocks

My Narrative Writing Piece

 

​He pushed his hand into the carved hand-print on the rock, there was a rumble from beneath his feet and then it opened and he fell with a KASPLAT! and he turned  into a skeleton and he saw a sowde and a shield he went in this weird  hole then he had to fight a giant monster with  big scary teeth that went BANG! BANG! And big scary and sharp claws that could cut a wall so he was worried.

So he gave a gulp and then he ran at the monster and he was lucky cos the monster mist him and he had the best time to strike and he hit the monster in the stomach and the monsters blood came out like a river. Then the man ran so he did not have to swim to the exit the man made it out just in time the river of blood got shut out the big wooden door and the man got shut on the other side of the door.

Toby's learning confrence

This is my learning conference about my reading,writing and maths.Please take a look at my goals and next steps for reading,writing and maths.